A: It´s your time, son!
B: Are you sure, mum? It sounds like a joke more than a real fact. You have been preparing me for this moment since I was a little kid.
A: Yeah! I know! That was my intention!
B: Excellent then. Everything is understood.
A: Really?
B: Of course, mum. Here is your luggage. I´ve been packing it up for months. It´s your turn to leave home and let me live my life. Good luck!
fantastic. love the unexpected ending.
ReplyDeleteVery good ending! I think it´s a common situation but only into our minds...(post-teenagers minds...)
ReplyDeleteMaybe... one day... everybody we can do this!!! I agree with Alfonso: very goog unexpected ending!
ReplyDeleteThe first time I read this story I found the ending very surprising! I really like it! :)
ReplyDeletehahaha!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!! I would like this story become true! I agree with the other comments, very good ending!
The end of the story is great! It makes the story work and as a result fantastic!
ReplyDeletegood work!
My mates have already said it but: the ending is PERFECT. Great story Alex!
ReplyDeleteThe ending is fantastic!
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