Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Around the world


                         

Emma: Oh, I have seen your photographs in your Facebook profile! Have you recently travelled to Canada?

Patsy: Yes, of course! I was there two weeks ago and I had the opportunity to try one of the best food I have ever tasted in my life... the most delicious pancakes in the world!
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6 comments:

  1. Ignacio YagüeDecember 15, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    the story has a predictable ending, it is about something real, it is about a fact.

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  2. nofictionDecember 17, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    had introduced something more surprising or even funny, very clear and specific. Good Ana.

    Angela

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  3. Alexandra de SantosDecember 18, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    Very good idea to focus on the pancakes! They were so delicious! This story sounds more like a normal story than about the International Fair,maybe you could introduce something about it. =)

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  4. Ana Algaba MorenoDecember 18, 2011 at 11:04 PM

    I expected the end in any other way.
    The image is quite appropiate.

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  5. Eva HerrónDecember 18, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    jejeje i agree with Patsy xD

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  6. Beatriz DíazJanuary 30, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    good way of focus the international fair. I expected a better ending.

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